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So I haven’t really looked at the old Literotica comments for a while and when I did I find the usual mixture of the highly complimentary and the highly contemptuous, so lets get into it!

Comments for ‘A Broken Marriage Redefined’

JimMcDonald609 wrote: THREE ALARM FIRE! Highly erotic idea and very well written. I am not a fan of episodic stories; however I would be interested in reading where this will go.

Anonymous wrote: FUNNIER THAN HELL! He would have taken one look at her, turned around and left. This is a man that is just days away from being divorced. Rather than have any submissive ideas, he still would have been full of anger. The minute he was out the door he would have called her sister and told her about what his ex-wife was offering. Mikey boy would have known about 10 seconds later. Even for fiction this was just stupid. Too soon into the divorce. She’d be lucky if he didn’t bitch slap her on his way out. The author has clearly never been through a divorce. STILL laughing at how bad this was.

Anonymous wrote: I am afraid I would be saying yes and doing everything she told me to do and loving it . I hope they get back together full time and he assumes his proper place as her cockold

Indysubmale wrote: OFF THE HOOK HOT! Out-motherfucking-standing! This author knows so well how to express the thoughts and emotions of a submissive man. I hope that this continues because I’d love to see just how much the wife will enjoy making more of her husband’s fantasies come true.

RandyVicar wrote: A HOT LITTLE STORY! A rarity on Literotica: The dialog between the characters is great and moves the story forward with limited exposition. It’s hot and focused and just plausible enough to bring you into its world

Anonymous wrote: EVERY FANTASY MATTERS. Great story! My man is interested in exploring this as am I. He’s just not interested in licking other guys junk or eating his own stuff…but…there has been ongoing discussion in trying what the rest of the story describes sans the two items mentioned. My husband is completely on board with me getting stuffed and filled by another guy and then cleaning out my creamy cream puff with his face. My man is on board with my seeing and possibly having sex with another guy with the understanding that he be kept in the loop at all times (within reason…like a text or so every 1 to 2 hours and when I get home he wants ALL the details which was weird the first time but was better the next time. I worry how my messing with another guy will hurt us but at the same time he is fully on board and I get great pleasure by pleasing my man in the bedroom. The no you for this story! It was great to be able to get some details to better understand his desires…which I fully intend to attempt to fulfill.

Anonymous wrote: PATHETIC! All you cucks are just pathetic. Why don’t you just do the world a favor and leave this planet. Rent is too high and we need to get rid of the useless first. Hell even murderers, rapist and even pedophiles are better than you cucks are.

Anonymous wrote: THANK YOU FROM MISSOULA MT. From a divorced cuck wannabe in Missoula Montana, I LOVED this. I don’t care what haters will say, I know there must be guys like me who dream of this. I have to confess I would have cum in my pants before I got to pleasure myself before my goddess. Dangerous due to kids but Have come so close admitting to my ex or dropping hint.

Anonymous wrote: The next day they found Gina’s cold body on the same coch… whit the face mutilated to a pulp of flesh, blod and Paul’s shit.

You can read ‘A Broken Marriage Redefined’ HERE

Comments for ‘Ready to Play’

Anonymous wrote: BEWARE WHAT YOU WISH FOR. Maybe he will eventually realise he is in an irreversible tunnel of desire and at the end of the tunnel there is only an empty space. He had a female that loved him but he did not understand that he had a rare and precious thing so like Pandora and her box he had to open it and will eventually know that particular box is empty. Love is a precious and rare thing and is the only good thing that survives death.

Anonymous wrote: ANOTHER CRAP BY SICK PEOPLE! You believe that sluts dominas and slaves are the right ingredients for a fulfilling partnership/marriage??!! How brain sick have you to be!! Only your lechery is the mainspring for your lives!!!

You can read ‘Ready to Play’ HERE

Comments for ‘The Fantasy Game’ 

Anonymous wrote: ONLY SICK! Minus 5* if possible!!! Each pointer to go better in writing is hopeless because mental ill people need psychological therapy!!!

Anonymous wrote: How insane has that author to be!!! A husband calls his wife mistress?? Is he brain sick? She dreams about other fuckers? So divorce the slut and she can fuck whom she want! And you go on with your life without that whore and be happy!!!

Mrswitch wrote: Nice imagination. Great story. Nice devious game. And as for the person that is who wrote this.
“The author did a very poor job on this pathetic story. It seems the author has some serious mental illness mixed with some cuckold issues and some cuckold issues that were transferred to this ugly story. This story lacks of creativity nonsense shallow low context poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story. This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through”
Why don’t you just admit you want to be a cuck and stop reading stories fantasizing about it and then lashing out at the author anonymously because you can’t handle your own fantasies?

Anonymous wrote: Loved it! You have the most awesome devious games!! 5 all the way!

You can read ‘The Fantasy Game’ HERE

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