Feedback on Literotica...

Since I can't sleep, I thought I would check out my Literotica pages and see if anyone's left any new feedback lately...


Thirty Seven Days

ANONYMOUS: Oh wonderful. So he's married to a worthless whore who seeks to turn him into a fag. How could I possibly miss the eroticism in that? What's next, he'll have to take it up the ass in order to get the cage off? Stories like these should end with either the whore or the nutless wonder's death, so someone can get out of the 'relationship'. I don't pretend to understand all of human nature, I get that some truly stupid things happen that are beyond my ken, but I'd die before submitting to that nonsense.

ANONYMOUS: She has no control. You don't need her. Remove the cage. You don't need a key - it's simple and a fool can do it. Grow a spine and realize she has no love or respect for you and is simply using you to satisfy her own sick, perverted amusement. Throw her out and change the locks. All done. The rest of this is unbelievable garbage.


Once a Month

ANONYMOUS: Glad you stopped writing, because this had not a single worthwhile thing in it.


Katherine's New Game

ANONYMOUS: The only thing he cleaned up...was her blood, after he broke her nose, blackened her eye and threw her out on her ass. Because who would stay with a whore who treated him like that?


A Game of Tease and Denial

ANONYMOUS: How about you get up and throw her out? Seems like the perfect answer to someone who wants to abuse and humiliate you. Adios!


Everything Has a Price - Chapter 15

ANONYMOUS: Perfect. I'm down with submissive but hate humiliation. This is incredibly realistic (if I had superhuman self-control) and I like the open ending. I'm choosing to think that it stays at the control level. Well done, this is great for people who don't understand sub guys.

ANONYMOUS: Now's your chance. This woman has demonstrated by her actions that she simply wants to use you for her own perverse entertainment. How does it feel to be a thing? Yeah - thought so. Time to get dressed, pack a bag and leave this self centred, manipulative bitch. She cares not one iota about you other than as her toy. You'd be a fool to stick around. Divorce her and search for someone who might actually love you.


More Fun With Dice

ANONYMOUS: Obviously not signing this crap! Cut the cage off - it's so easy. Smack the bitch in the mouth, leave and find yourself a good life far away from the manipulative, skanky whore. Why would he possibly do anything else? Even to contemplate doing otherwise is a load of horse pucky.


Out of Your Hands - Chapter 3

TRACYINDALYNN: To submit is beautiful. If what you write is true. You are a beautiful man for giving your Goddess everything she deserves. If only I could find a man as worthy as you! Thank you for sharing your life with us.


Owned - Chapter 3

ANONYMOUS: Just divorce her. You are being treated as an object, as her toy, her plaything. I don't see any man putting up with that behaviour. Pack up and let her play with herself. This is a self-centred, abusive, manipulative bitch and you need to leave her in your dust.


Owned - Chapter 8

ANONYMOUS: Sounds like my slut mom and sissy dad, only at my house I fuck them both and let some of my friends use them as well.

NOROPES: To imagine the scent of real cock for the first time and then mixed with Mistress. Then accepting that her pussy is creaming on a dominant man's larger cock while you carry large aching balls. The acceptance. The humiliation. The degredation.

ANONYMOUS: By now any man would have stood up and thrown the abusive bitch to the kerb. Why would anyone stay with someone who degraded and humiliated them? This stupid bitch would be out on her ass in a heart beat. This isn't remotely or stimulating. She'd treat the dog better.

ANONYMOUS: I can't agree, unless you are making a difference between a man and a wimp. The guy asked for what she is doing to him and seems to like it. The author has any and all right to write anything that does not insult my intelligence. I could not see myself putting up with this, but then I would never ask for it. I'm not going to have a tizzy about some guy getting what he asks for when there are stories where this type of crap is delved out without consent.


The Anniversary

ANONYMOUS: Hope she enjoyed...the divorce. She earned it!


Gotta love the trolls, and I take it as a twisted kind of compliment that so many people seem to think my stories are a factual account of my life!

New story up on Literotica...

My latest piece of writing has been posted on Literotica, as I said before it's not a Femdom or Chastity story at all, but for those who might be interested you can click below to read on...

Kate's Story Ch1

A couple of things...

Just a couple of things to get down here...

I've just submitted a new piece of writing to Literotica, it's not a Femdom or Chastity story but some of you might wish to read it, so when it is published on the site I will post a link here.

I mentioned in a recent post that I was allowed to cum while worshipping Mistress R's ass the other day, what I didn't mention was how fantastic it was, and how receptive Mistress R seemed to it. Indeed, she let out a lovely moan when I was allowed to tongue her asshole on Monday, and I was somewhat surprised when she responded to me request to be allowed to tongue her ass again on Thursday. The great thing was that on Thursday I was allowed to use my hands to part her cheeks and really get a good look at her ass before I used my tongue to worship it, and it was soooo good.
My cock was rock hard and as I worshipped her I could feel my orgasm getting closer and closer, I broke off to warn her just as she was telling me that I was allowed to cum but only if I could do it before she counted to ten. Well, she barely got '1' out of her mouth before I erupted and she stroked my cock until '10' and then stopped. I'm not sure if she would have stopped at ten had I started to cum later though... I'd like to think she would, but I'm not sure.
She collected some cum on her fingers and had me lick them clean, which I hadn't done for ages... I'd kinda missed that, I must admit.

New story added...

A new story (Eating Cum from Kimberley) has been added to my Literotica tab (top of the page).

Literotica haters attack...

Well, it's been a week since I submitted 'Thirty Seven Days' to Literotica, so I wandered over there to check the score and any comments I might have got. I clicked on my 'submissions' page, and well, 2.18 out of 5, that's my worst score by a mile and what's this.... 33 comments, surely some mistake! But no. No mistake... no mistake whatsoever!

WRONG CATEGORY!!!
This sick twisted crap needs to be in FETISH, GAY or BDSM.
This is not the place for your sick, evil fantasies. Any husband caught like that would get bolt cutters to release himself , smash her skull in and cut off her lover's cock.
Do yourself a favour and post this garbage in categories more akin to what it is.

Bizzarely, this was posted by someone calling themselves 'SlaveRowan'
There's tons more like this, but also a few like this:

I Laughed As I Posted My Score...
Knowing the loving wives critics, I anticipated the vile hated comments. There is only one style of story they like... one that ends with the bitch destroyed or dead. Story was well written and would like to see chapter two.

So, thanks to TXany.

If you want a laugh you can check out the rest here

I usually post in the BDSM category, but to me this was a pretty straightforward 'cuckolding' story, so I didn't think it really fitted in the BDSM category. Perhaps in hindsight 'Fetish' would have been a better category, but I thought that 'Loving Wives' was where the cuckolding stories went, and the person who accepted it didn't change it either so... fuck knows!